Wk3-Tues

From last week, you were asked to "f inish a draft of the writing for your mock homepage; we use this as our pair editing material for class Tuesday".

Mock-homepage Edit Workshop
Add a link from your personal wiki homepage to the mock-homepage on your blog. Quickly review your mock-homepage. If it does not include at least two headings and one list, add these! Then please print two copies with your name on it, giving one to your professor. Your classmate will also need access to your voice and audience charts.

First Pass

 * Share the print-out of your mock-homepage.
 * Share your voice / audience charts.
 * Give and receive comments on your adherence to this "program."

Second Pass

 * Review the Yahoo Clarity Guidelines.
 * Give and receive comments on edits for clarity.
 * Make changes to your "mock-homepage" based on feedback

Homework
Complete changes to your mock-homepage based on the feedback you have recieved. Publish an updated version as a page on your blog. GIve it an appropriate title, such as "mock-homepage-edited." You should also read: Yahoo: “Shorten” Ch. 13